Edvards when you said arched it was interesting and instead of the gingerbread man you should have said the gingerbread woman because you said it about a woman not a man and the speech was small as.At start I did not get it but when you got to the running away bit I understood what you said and from then it was excellent.
Edvards when you said arched it was interesting and instead of the gingerbread man you should have said the gingerbread woman because you said it about a woman not a man and the speech was small as.At start I did not get it but when you got to the running away bit I understood what you said and from then it was excellent.
ReplyDeleteyou did good
ReplyDeleteGood story Edvards. You need to practise saying "ask" the "s" sound is before the "k"
ReplyDeleteGood job, Edvards!
ReplyDelete~Mrs. Helwig ;)